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Interesting reading, I enjoyed it alot,

Some pictures would help with the explanation of how the gun works

and I didn't know if you want us to proof read or not so I did
but I'm not an english teacher, so that it for what its worth

Under footnote 17, catch is written twice

PAragrapgh below footnote 29 says hand fire instead of hang

after footnote 37 his quote should have quotes " "

In the conclusion, the is a period missing
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